Teacher Feedback

Your blog is mostly complete. You have included research into appropriate documentaries, research into your audience and other significant planning information. Well done on labeling blog entries along the way.

To improve:

• make your blog more visually presentable by using more images, video images, etc.
• use bullet points to make information easier to read
• be creative with audience research, such as using a graph, bar chart, etc
• use colour, font changes and sizes to make it more interesting

What about this film?